Ludovic Courtès <ludo(a)gnu.org> writes:
+We are in early stages of formulating a governance model. At
this time
I think it should be “in the early stages”.
+we look at examples such as the GNOME Foundation and Debian.
Our goal
+is to allow for transparent decision-making, to achieve broad
+involvement of Assembly participants in decision-making, and a
healthy
+turnover of [responsibilities](/en/documents/roles).
“goal is” —> “goals are”?
The rest looks good to me. Thanks to both of you!
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Ricardo